i like the change you made to the synth. Also the calm breaks are excellent.
the only constructive criticism i can give now is for the vocals. the "God King" part sounds a bit too piercing and thin, i would try to reduce some of its noise from the middle (or maybe upper middle) frequency area (sorry i suck with terminology). Also it might sound even better with a reeverb or a delay to give it more of a grand cathedral type feel. either way, It's sounds pretty nice and your creativity is refreshing